Sunday, 19 July 2015

My drafted writing


WALT describe one thing with extra detail
We will:
make a word bank
use precise vocabulary 
write impacting sentences that make sense
partner conference

When I arrived at the movies I saw Lydia sitting down on a chair with her mum my mind kept screaming it is so  bizarre to see her here! I excitingly asked grandma if we could sit together she screamed with joy yes you can then I rushed over to Lydia and we started chatting away with laughter. When the movie started the ads came on. Lydia got annoyed at me because what ever had writing in the ads I would say it after. Now the real movie has started, me and Lydia laughed the whole way through the movie it was heleriss. 

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